Last week I led the two-day ‘communicating with the media’ course for the umpteenth time. In this course I often explain that journalists have to be treated like clients. You might think this sounds all well and good, but what does it actually mean? The people following the course and I drew up a list of issues that need to be taken into account when making press releases in a client-friendly way. Here is the list of 50 tips.
1. Do your homework
- know who has written what about your company in the past (Google News is not watertight for this, but it is free)
- regularly read the publications you are targeting
- follow the journalists that your organisation is interested in on social media
- send each press release to a different selection of journalists, depending on the subject
- send press releases to people, not organisations (make sure you have a detailed list of addressees)
2. Provide news
- what is the impact of the news? (No impact means there is no need for a press release)
- simply announcing intentions doesn’t usually work
- don’t hide news in the middle of the text; get straight to the point at the very beginning
- don’t just provide the impact; state the benefits too
3. A press release should be sent my email
- write the press release in the body of the email
- the subject line of an email is no place for a double title
- don’t send any attachments; it’s much better to provide download links
4. Special treatment
- you can choose to provide extra information selectively to some journalists
- you can choose to provide a background interview selectively to some journalists
- many journalists are interested in extra regional information
- with particularly important news, you can pre-warn some journalists beforehand (but don’t announce the news yet)
5. Different languages
- don’t have translations done, but instead ensure you have well-written versions that get to the essence of the matter (adapting the text to the local audience if necessary)
6. Provide more than just a press release
- where can you download high resolution photos?
- it’s fine to provide other images and illustrations too
- relevant statistical material is always useful, preferably as a very simple spreadsheet
- where can people view or download background information?
- write additional versions of the press release if required (a more technical version, local versions or a simplified version, e.g. a step-by-step plan)
- provide your contact details and make sure you are available
- have an expert available by telephone to provide extra information to people who ask for it
7. Don’t irritate journalists
- calling to check if it’s been received is a really bad idea
- quotes that always start with “we are pleased that…” can be annoying
- a constant stream of press releases sent at regular intervals (such as every third Thursday of the month) will go straight in the recycle bin
- sending a press release out again after a couple weeks because it didn’t work the first time is communication suicide
- avoid plays-on-words and puns; they are mostly untranslatable and rarely funny
- sending out all press releases with an embargo could result in you having your own publication embargo to deal with
8. Press releases should be ‘copy-paste’ material
- deliver texts that can be copied, with regard to both structure and style
- pdf files sent as attachments to emails are not easy to edit
- you don’t really need to include your logo or the rest of your house style; they won’t be used anyway
9. Press releases should be ‘copy-paste’ material, so make sure you use good language
- don’t use jargon, ever
- don’t write impersonal texts
- don’t use broken language because it needs to be legally correct (press releases and contracts are two different things)
- use simple language that sounds like spoken language
- use affirmative language that is powerful without being boastful
- spelling and grammar mistakes are unforgivable
- always use active language (avoid passive forms wherever possible)
10. Press releases should be ‘copy-paste’ material, so keep them brief
- short title
- short sentences
- short paragraphs
- short quotes, or non at all
- short words, even
- keep the whole text as short as possible
11. Press releases should be ‘copy-paste’ material, so make sure they are well structured
- don’t write texts in chronological order (the historical approach); the essence of the news is today and the impact is in the future
- try to include all the how, who, what, where, when and why information straight away in the first paragraph
- so provide the essence first, and more background information later
- also make sure you clarify the news; don’t leave it open to journalist interpretation

Larry Page made a good point 



